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Hidding from you,
Hidding from the truth...
Im trying to escape,
Im trying to RUN!
But its just impossible...
Impossible to hide forever,
Impossible to run.
Should I just stop?
Should I save the energy for you?
Would that be better?
I honestly dont think so...
I gues the quote was right...
"Take the pain out of love, and the love wont exist"
</3
Wrote this today^^' wow, it just so true... and my freind was almost crying^^' she kept saying: "This isnt you!!! you SMILE! Goddammit >.<"
hehe, but it is me... damn that freakin' boy...
T.T....
TT.TT
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:iconezzabezza1:
ezzabezza1 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010  Student
wow that's awsome! =D
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TJzett Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
It's one of my worst, but thank you^^:hug:
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:iconezzabezza1:
ezzabezza1 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010  Student
no problem :pat:
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TJzett Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe<3 You are welcome to read some of my newer ones, they are much better^^
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:iconezzabezza1:
ezzabezza1 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010  Student
ok ill give them a try^^ =D
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TJzett Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks a lot:D
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:iconezzabezza1:
ezzabezza1 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2010  Student
=D
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:iconezzabezza1:
ezzabezza1 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2010  Student
ok i'll give them a try^^ =D
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forgetthedreampoet Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2009   Writer
I like this a lot, although it is sad.): You only have one major grammar error along with a few apostrophe (';) issues where the ' was not in there. The error is:

"I gues the cuote was right" should be "I guess the quote was right"

There you go! Great job, I hope I see more writing from you soon.
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TJzett Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
hehe i will write more when i am feeling like I actually have something to say^^ thanks a lot sweet one<3
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